| Comment | I maintain that the first examples sentences about the doctors are definitely wrong. I stand by the third. The problem you mention could be avoided by saying:
"Doctors recommend to their heart patients that they drink a glass of red wine every day."
Which you do in fact say. The result is a fine, but in my opinion rather long-winded, sentence.
I think it's a bit silly to imagine that I could recommend something to someone about someone else or to no one in particular. A recommendation is a direct address, the idea that someone is being addressed is inseparable from the use of the verb. "I recommend to you that your brother clean his room," is a very strange, perhaps wrong, formulation. The verb recommend, by its nature, suggests that there is someone to whom the recommendation is being made. That sentence "I recommend to you..." I would say either doesn't make sense or is a slightly ironic (and again, probably wrong) way of saying "You need to get your brother to clean his room, or there will be problems for you."
That being said, I see what you are saying about the indirect recommendation. It sounds as if a newspaper called up the doctor and got him to say "I recommend that my patients drink a glass of wine a day." It does have more of a "general" feel to it.
The long-windedness problem can be avoided by using "advise," as you suggest. Your first sentence using advise is, if not wrong, strange-sounding. The second is correct and sounds natural.
"I advised him to reconsider." is stylistically much better than "I recommended to him that he reconsider" |
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