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    "According to"

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    Joachim L., an experienced teacher in Schleswig, explains that stundets develop metacognitive stragtegies as they begin to realise the advantage of early preparation and think consciously about the strategy.
    According to this, experienced teachers from different academic high schools state that overall grades improve.

    Wieso ist in diesem Zusammenhang "Accordig to" falsch? Wurde von meinem Unidozenten als falsch makiert ( native speaker: Amercian).
    VerfasserKatha22 Feb. 11, 10:37
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    Well, I tend to agree with your prof as I am unclear what this (According to this) refers to, in your eyes.

    What is the connecting bit (in terms of content) that is supposed to lead from sentence one into sentence two: is it the explanantion, the strategies, the realisation, the advantage?
    #1Verfasser teflsimone (655257) 22 Feb. 11, 11:00
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    *Wieso ist in diesem Zusammenhang "Accordig to" falsch?*


    Weil es keinen Sinn ergibt.

    Was soll das denn deiner Meinung nach heißen?


    ... und was bitte sind "stundets" und "stragtegies"?

    Was für eine Sprache ist "Amercian"?


    Fragen über Fragen ...
    #2Verfassercoby22 Feb. 11, 11:01
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    I think you mean something like "This is supported by experienced teachers ..., who state that grades have improved [where early preparation methods are applied]".

    "According to this" is not the right link. In fact, no link is really necessary here at all, and, IMO, no link is better than the wrong link. English tends to be more tolerant of a series of simple declarative sentences (though one shouldn't overdo that style either).

    #3VerfasserBuddy22 Feb. 11, 11:26
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    Ich schätze, das ist eine Verwechslung mit "in accordance with this", unabhängig davon, ob das stilistisch die beste Wahl wäre. Soll heißen: die Erfahrung, dass sich Noten im Laufe der Zeit verbessern, steht mit dieser Theorie im Einklang.
    #4Verfasser igm (387309) 22 Feb. 11, 11:37
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    It makes no sense, that's why. What does "this" refer to?
    #5Verfasser escoville (237761) 22 Feb. 11, 11:47
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    Ich vermute: Mit der Theorie, dass, wie dieser Joachim L. meint, Schüler über die Zeit metakognitive Strategien entwickeln.
    #6Verfasser igm (387309) 22 Feb. 11, 11:54
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    I don't get how teachers "state that overall grades improve" relates to the first sentence at all, though.
    #7Verfasser CM2DD (236324) 22 Feb. 11, 11:55
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    Maybe you meant "accordingly"? (If the theory of the 1st sentence can be seen in practice in the 2nd.)
    #8VerfasserStrawberry (357492) 22 Feb. 11, 12:00
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    How about: "Joachim L.'s findings are borne out / supported by...

    (Agree with Buddy that no link is necessary)
    #9Verfassermikefm (760309) 22 Feb. 11, 12:11
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    Well, what's the point in guessing, "maybe you meant this, maybe you meant that ..." - when actually all it takes is for Katha to explain (in German) what (s)he was trying to say?
    #10Verfassercoby22 Feb. 11, 12:15
     
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