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    "on" statt "distributed on"

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    Hallo!

    hier mal der Satz:


    "With a total GLA of 1.280.869 m2 on 60 schemes, "A" has more than double as much GLA, distributed on more than three times as many shopping centres than "B", counting 562.539 m2 of total GLA on merely 18 schemes."

    ich habe folgende Fragen dazu:

    - kann ich für "verteilt auf" auch einfach nur "on" nehmen, statt "distributed on" was in diesem Satz schon vorkommt?
    - Satzanfang ok mit dem "With" oder eher nicht?!
    - ist der Satz verständlich?
    A hat mehr als doppelt so viel GLA wie B.
    A hat mehr als dreimal so viele Einkaufszentren wie B.
    Author MChris (877484) 04 Mar 14, 10:24
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    If I understand your sentence, I think it should be:

    With a total GLA of 1.280.869 m2 on 60 schemes, "A" has more than twice as much GLA and distributes it to more than three times as many shopping centres than does "B", [counting 562.539 m2 of total GLA on merely 18 schemes".]

    [The last part of the sentence, in brackets, I do not understand.]
    #1AuthorHappyWarrior (964133) 04 Mar 14, 10:39
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    - 1,280,869 m², i.e. comma not point
    - twice the amount of GLA [gross lettable area] distributed over more than three times as many shopping centres as B, which has ....
    - could also use in 60 schemes (though I'm not sure about the word "scheme" - does this refer to "shopping centres"?)
    #2Author Spike BE (535528) 04 Mar 14, 11:17
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    Good job, Spike. (I wish I'd known what GLA meant.]
    #3AuthorHappyWarrior (964133) 04 Mar 14, 11:23
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    Super! Vielen Dank!
    #4Author MChris (877484) 04 Mar 14, 14:35
     
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