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Technology can improve the quality of life and governments need to plan carefully for the
future (Turnbull, 2015).
Technology affects everyday’s life in a positve and in a negative way. Therefore goverments have to be creative and think and act with foresight.
The hardest language to learn is Mandarin as fluency requires memorising thousands of
characters (Johnson, 2014).
Practising Mandarin language skills permanently is indispensable to speak it fluently.
In recent years there has been growing concern among environmentalists and some car
owners about the pollutants that cars emit into the atmosphere (Elliot, 2005).
The quantity of car emissions increase concerns of environmentalists and some car owners as well.
The first Chinese immigrants to Australia arrived in 1848 as shepherds, land clearers and general farm hands (Irwin, 2001, p.8).
Agricultural occupation were the regularly occupation of immigrants from China to Australia in 1848.
Brazil’s Amazon jungle is alive with millions of plant and animal species. But the jungle
shrinking. Loggers cut down trees for wood and paper (Better Lesson, 2011).
The variety of Amazons plants and animal species is threatened by loggers.