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    as well position

    Kommentar
    I know that it's most natural to use "as well" at the end of a sentence. But since variation is important, I am asking myself if it is possible to use as well, instead of also, in the following sentence.

    (1) In her youth, she was areal cutie. So she was always in a relationship. She had a brief relationship with Marc. She ALSO had a relationship with my best mate Tom.

    --> She had a relationship with my best friend Tom as well.
    --> She had as well a relationship with my best friend Tom.

    How do you feel about the position of 'as well" in my final sentence? Is it correct/acceptable?

    Thank you very much in advance.
    VerfasserThe unwoken fool16 Okt. 08, 10:40
    Kommentar
    Well, I'm not a native speaker of English -

    but this doesn't sound quite "right" (i.e. idiomatic) to me at all.
    #1Verfasser Woody 1 (455616) 16 Okt. 08, 10:51
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    It doesn't even sound natural with commas to me.

    I would only worry about variation if you have used "also" already in the same sentence or the one before or after. Otherwise, it is such an unremarkable word that it would not stand out as being repetitive if you use it twice in a paragraph or something.

    Some other possibilities might be:

    She had a brief relationship with Marc. Furthermore, she had a relationship with my best mate Tom.
    She had a brief relationship with Marc. What is more, she had a relationship with my best mate Tom.
    She had a brief relationship with Marc, and another/ a longer relationship with my best mate Tom.
    She had a brief relationship with Marc, as well as a relationship with my best mate Tom.

    I'm repeating "relationship" here as I guess it is a rhetoric device?
    #2Verfasser CM2DD (236324) 16 Okt. 08, 11:05
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    She had as well a relationship with my best friend Tom.

    I'm afraid that sentence does not only sound 'not quite right', it is incorrect.

    You could say "As well as that, she had a relationship with my best friend Tom" (although it sounds a little clumsy.)

    One variant would be the one below (with my suggestions in bold):

    In her youth, she was a real cutie. Consequently/As a result/For this reason/This meant that she was always in a relationship. She had a brief relationship with Marc, as well as having had a relationship with my best mate Tom.

    Other than that, CM2DD's suggestions are also good.
    #3Verfasser Richard (236495) 16 Okt. 08, 11:14
     
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