Hey dear Leo-Team and dear Leo-User,
I have to summarize the fairytale Hensel and Gretel. This is what came out.
I wanted to ask you, wether you can have a look and tell me, how you like it.
I'm not concerned about the contet, but about the tenses. I used present tense. Would be great if you could help me, because i'm a little depressed because of my english knowledge :S
The fairytale “Hensel And Gretel” is written by the brother Grimm, deals with 2 little children who are left in the forest, because of their parents. As they search for the way back, they find a house which is made out of bread. The owner, a witch, wants to eat them, but finally she dies in the oven. So Hensel and Gretel survive and find their father.
The father and stepmother must get rid of the children, because there is not enough food for all 4 stomachs. So the stepmother convinces the father to leave the children alone in the forest. Their first attempt to get rid of the children, called Hensel and Gretel, goes wrong because Hensel is able to find they back home. The parents are successful on their second attempt. The children get lost, but they find a tasty-looking house, made out of candies and bread. In that house lives a which, who tries to kill Hensel and Gretel. But with a trick, Gretel can lock her in a oven, so the witch dies. At the end of the storie, Hensel and Gretel find their home and father, but the stepmother is dead.