Hallo zusammen,
Ich wusste nicht ob ich das oben bei Land und Leute, Sprachlabor oder hier reinstellen soll.
Da es nichts weltbewegendes ist, hab ich mich mal für hier entschieden =)

Ich arbeite gerade an einem Song und würde gerne eure Meinung wissen. Resp. eventuelle Verbesserungsvorschläge.
Würde mich freuen =)

Phrase 1

It was yesterday
When I’ve looked into your eyes
And you showed me your smile
Which has caught my mind

I have never thought
It could happen to us
Now I’m feeling your breath
Blowing through my hair

Refrain:

You are far away
You can’t be by my side
Everything I still have
Are my precious memories

Through my heart
Shines your light
Fair and bright
Through the dark

See your smile
In the sky
Feel alone
Feel your warmth


Phrase 2

Hear you asking why
I had to go this fast
Have we missed something
Of course not, my dear

Every moment love
we have lived in this time
And I’m sending now
the wind of my wings

Refrain (mod)

I am far away
I can’t be by your side
But I’m still there
Watching over you

Through your heart
Shines my light
Fair and bright
Through the dark

See your smile
In the sky
Don’t feel alone
Look above