Hi all,

This weekend i pass the BEC Higher Test. Therefore, I wrote some kind of texts i.e. report, letter, proposal this week. I would be very gratefull if somebody proofread my report.
After reading please tell me if my vocabulary is adequate for a business report and where my biggest mistakes are.

In advance, thank you for proofreading!

Regards,
Bec Higher candidate

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Short report – Which photocopier to choose?

Introduction
The aim of this report is to compare the photocopier costs of Carda, KB and Sebu.

Comparison
The purchase price of Carda is the lowest. It is slightly more than $600 but the running cost are the highest and its warranty cost remain at a mid-level.
The purchasing price of the KB is with 700$ slightly higher than the Carda but about $400 cheaper than the Sebu. The advantage of the Sebu is its warranty and running cost, which are the lowest. However, the running and warranty cost of KD are just a little higher. Out of this reason, the KD and Sebu have the same expected total costs of $1’800 for initial 2 year. The total costs of Carda are $100 higher.

Conclusion
Because of the acceptable warranty and running cost, as well as the middle purchase price the KD ist the best deal.

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