Letter of Reference

To Whom It May Concern:

This letter serves to confirm that Mr. X, (born July x, XXXX, - in den meisten Ländern wird die Frage nach dem Alter als Diskriminierung erachtet) complete a practical training at X in X, Germany from June x, XXXX to August x, XXXX.
Mr. X gained a comprehensive insight into the processes of human resources consulting. His excellent skills in the field of personnel and organizational psychology, as well as his marketing skills, enabled him to lead a team responsible for the creation of training material. Furthermore, he assisted us in arranging an online assessment (was willst Du damit sagen?) and he was working in our customer service department as well.
It was a pleasure working with Mr. X. [In this limited period of time - weglassen oder: short period] He was a valuable asset to our company and he performed all tasks to our complete satisfaction.
He is very proactive and (was willst du sagen?: to bring himself independently into the working process as quickly as possible - he adapted well to new challenges?) and he interacted very well with his fellow workers.
We consider Mr. X a loyal and faithful person and we do not hesitate to recommend him for… (gefaellt mir nicht, vllt. hat jdn. einen besseren Vorschlag). Should a suitable vacancy arise, we would be happy to work with him again. (dito)
If you have any questions or need further information, please do not hesitate to contact the undersigned.

Yours faithfully,
...

sorry, typos: Mr. X completed…, of course

Vielen Dank für die Anregungen soweit.

Hab meine Ausführungen noch einmal überarbeitet. Vieles ist natürlich auch Geschmackssache. Aber sind noch wirkliche sprachliche Fehler drin? Oft bin ich mir z.B. bei dem korrekten Gebrauch der englischen Zeitformen unsicher: Sagt man beispielsweise eher
"It has been a pleasure to work with him." oder einfach
"It was a pleasure to work..."?




To Whom It May Concern:

This letter serves to confirm that Mr. X completed a practical training at X in X, Germany from June X, XXXX to August XX, XXXX.
Mr. X gained a comprehensive insight into the processes of human resources consulting.
His excellent skills in the field of personnel and organizational psychology, as well as his marketing skills, enabled him to lead a team responsible for the creation of training material. Furthermore, he assisted us in arranging training courses for prospective personnel officers (gemeint sind angehende Personalreferenten) and he was involved in our customer service affairs (an/in der/die Kundenbetreuung beteiligt/eingebunden).
Mr. X is very proactive, he adapted well to new challenges and he interacted very well with his fellow workers.
It was a pleasure to work with Mr. X. He was a valuable asset to our company and he performed all tasks to our complete satisfaction.
We consider him as a loyal and faithful person, thus we have no reservations in strongly recommending him. Should a suitable vacancy arise, we would be happy to work with him again.
If you have any questions or need further information, please do not hesitate to contact the undersigned.

Yours faithfully,...

It has been a pleasure working with him

Okay, aber wann sagt man denn "pleasure to..."? es heit ja z.B. auch "It was a pleasure to meet you", richtig?

Der Satz "..., thus we have no reservations in strongly recommending him" gefällt mir irgendwie noch nicht so richtig. "
Ideen?
...we recommend him for (Position/Stelle XY) geht auch schlecht, weil möglichst offen sein soll wofür die Empfehlung ausgestellt wird. Könnte man auch folgendes sagen:
"...thus we give him our highest recommendation."
oder würde das vom Sinn her nicht widergeben, dass mein alter Arbeitgeber dem neuen meine besondere Befähigung attestiert?

Hallo,
auch ich bin nicht sicher, ob ich mein zeugnis so richtig verfasst habe?
es geht um ein praktikum in einem architekturbüro, dass ich wärend meines studiums geleistet haben. zudem weiß ich nicht wie ich die zeit meines P. richtig in den text einfüge....ich hoffe ihr könnt mir iwi helfen?



To Whom it may concern.

This letter serves to confirm that Mrs xxx was employed as intern.
Mrs xxx solved this internship as a part of her study, as an architect, at the Kassler University.

During her time with us Mrs xxx gaint an insight in organisation and accomplishment in construction management. She also passed through several assembly sections.
Mrs xxx was very valuable as an improvement of our team.


During her time with us we found that Mrs xxx was very willing to carry out any duties assigned to her. She used initiative and worked well without supervision. Mrs xxx worked very well with her colleagues and was a pleasure to have on our team.


Should you have any questions or need further clarification please do not hesitate to contact the undersigned,

Yours faithfully, xxx

Only Mrs if you're married. otherwise Miss.

This letter serves to confirm that Mrs xxx was employed as an intern

ooohhhhh, danke....hab gar nicht auf das Mrs und Miss geachtet....

und ist es denn richtig die zeit des P. hier an diese Stelle einzufügen?


This letter serves to confirm that Miss xxx was employed as an intern.
Miss xxx solved this internship from July,25 th,2005 to December,9th, 2005as a part of her study, as an architect, at the Kassler University.

Ms not Mrs or Miss

complete not solve

doesn't need the commas around as an architect

gained insight into the organization and completion of... (there's a better word than completion but it's not coming to me)

perhaps: did a rotation in each of several assembly sections

valuable as an improvement makes no sense-a valuable asset to our team perhaps?

performance maybe?

The organisation and performance of construction management?