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    Hello Lisa,
    It is so nice to hear from you. Thanks a lot for your fast answer.

    Referring to your questions.
    First of all I have to say the estimated date of graduation in my studies will be in summer 2009, in June only my exchange year in Mexico has become to an end. After finishing my studies I would love to work at the editorial office of a film production company or an advertising agency or in any sector of film production.

    Talking about my salary compensation. Actually I did not expect any payment. My main ambition is expanding my own skills and learning a lot at the internship. But of course if there is the possibility to receive a salary I would not refuse it.

    After watching both of your homepages I would say I am the perfect match for your company. I am a young, active woman full of energy who is known as a “trendsetter” in my personal environment. People often says that I am kind of crazy but a very likeable person with a great congeniality (crazy in the meaning of extraordinary ideas).Additionally to my extensive international experiences which would be helpful for your plans in becoming an world-wide service company I am very good in communicating with people. I learned a lot about different cultures and living abroad gave me new perceptions in many ways. So I am sure my skills would be useful to you.

    I also do have some questions:
    In which projects are you working during the time of my internship? Could you describe me some of my estimated responsibilities?
    VerfasserLunita (428201) 04 Apr. 08, 20:28
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    Hello Lisa,
    It is so nice to hear from you. Thank you for your prompt response.

    In regards to your questions, first of all I expect to graduate in the summer 2009, It was only last June that my exchange year in Mexico has come to an end. After finishing my studies I would love to work at the editorial office of a film production company or advertising agency or in any sector of film industry.

    As to my salary expectations, I actually do not expect any monetary compensation. My main ambition is to expand my own skills and knowledge during this internship. But, of course, if there is the possibility to receive a salary I would not refuse it.

    After viewing both of your homepages I consider that I am the perfect match for your company. I am a young active woman full of energy and have been known as a “trendsetter” to my friends. People often says that I am kind of crazy (maybe: I am a little eccentric), but a very likeable person with great congeniality. In addition to my extensive international experiences, which would be helpful for your plans in becoming a world-wide service company, I am very good at communicating with people. I have learned much about different cultures and living abroad has given me new perceptions in many ways. So I am sure my skills would be useful to you.

    I also do have some questions:
    On which projects will you be working during the time of my internship? Are you able at this time to describe me some of my eventual responsibilities?


    Here are just some suggestions to the English.
    #1VerfasserTimo05 Apr. 08, 10:29
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    Kommentar
    Hello Lisa,
    Thanks a lot for your quick reply. It is so nice to hear from you.

    Referring to your questions:
    I expect to graduate in summer 2009. It was only last June that my exchange year in Mexico has come to an end. After completing my studies, I would love to work at the editorial office of a film production company, an advertising agency, or in any sector of the film industry.

    Concerning my desired salary, I actually do not expect any monetary compensation. My main ambition is to enhance my skills and knowledge during my internship. If however a salary is paid, I would not reject it.

    Having read both of your company's homepages and thus gotten an impression of your company's values, I believe to fit perfectly to your company culture. I am a young, active, open-minded, and creative woman full of energy who has often inspired her friends. I have often been told that I am valued as a likeable, friendly and reliable person with a great congeniality. In addition to my extensive international experiences, which will be of value for your plans to become a world-wide service provider, I am very communicative and possess great social skills. Having lived abroad in , I have gained considerable insights into different cultures which provided me with new perceptions of various kinds. These skills could certainly be leveraged in your company.

    I would also like to address some questions concerning the internship:
    Could you tell me on what kind of projects you will be working on during the time of my internship? What would potential tasks and responsibilities look like?


    I am very much looking forward to hearing from you and would like to
    thank you for considering my application.

    Sincerely,
    #2VerfasserPersonal coach ;-)05 Apr. 08, 19:36
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    Actually, better start off with

    "Dear Lisa,"
    #3VerfasserPersonal Coach :-)05 Apr. 08, 19:37
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    Muchas Gracias:)

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    ihr seid genial



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    Oh man.Danke. Ihr seid einfach super. Das hört sich echt alles genial an was ihr da geschrieben habt. Viiielen lieben Dank!!!
    #4VerfasserLunita (428201) 06 Apr. 08, 19:59
     
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