Kann das bitte jemand korrektur lesen ob das vom Englischen und so passt?!
Ich bin noch nicht so gut und darum bitte, bitte duchlesen und die Fehler ausbessern! :-)

Dear Mrs. Caroline and Mr. Paul Carty

Hello,
My name is Michaela Ebner and I’m from Austria.
I attend the Federal Secondary Collage Elmberg.
I want you to ask if you are looking for a practical trainee for the summer of 2009. Because in my school we have to do a practical training for 14 weeks and I would like to do it in Ireland on your farm. I’ve never been in Ireland before and I want to improve my command of English and I also want to study further my know how about horses.
A former student recommended your company to me.
In summer of 2008 I already have done a practical training in a riding stable in Austria. (www.sunnyhillranch.at ) and I really liked my work.
And now I want to know if you are interested?

Please contact me as soon as you can.

Thank you very much!

Yours sincerely Michaela Ebner