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    Referat für Englischprüfung - Bitte drüber schauen ob alles korrekt ist

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    Referat für Englischprüfung

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    Bitte drüber schauen ob alles korrekt ist

    Examples/ definitions with source references
    1. Folie
    11th of September 2001– The worst day in the USA



    2. Folie
    On the morning 11th September 2001 there was the worst terrrorist attack of our time.
    Many people from all over the world sat down stunned in front of their TV’s.
    There were four planes which were hijacked after their take off and within one and a half hours targeted on important American buildings.



    3. Folie
    The first plane, flight number 11 of the American Airlines, that originally was to fly from Bosten to Los Angeles, flew into the north tower of the World Trade Center in New York. at 8.45 a.m.
    On board the boeing 767 were 92 people.



    4. Folie
    18 minutes later, at 9.03 a.m. the second plane crashed into the south tower of the World Trade Center.
    There were 65 persons on board the flight number 175 of the United Airlines.



    5. Folie
    When the second plane hit the tower, everyone realized that it was a terrorist attack.
    The planes were fully loaded with fuel and so they were like big fire bombs.
    The towers were immediately on fire.



    6. Folie
    Desperate and helpless people who were in the top floors jumped down out of the windows.



    7. Folie
    Exactly at 9.45 a.m. the third plane crashed into the Pentagon in Washington D.C. .
    The Boeing 757 was like a big fire bomb, too.
    The planned destination of this plane was San Fransisco.
    On board the American Airlines flight number 77 were 64 people.
    With this the attacks had not yet ended.







    8. Folie
    At 10.10 a.m. the fourth hijacked plane crashed near Pittsburgh in Pensylvania in a wooded area.
    Everybody thought that this plane had either the White House or Camp David, as a target.
    Passengers, who had heard of the other attacks by mobile phone planned to overpower the hijackers.
    Perhaps the passengers prevented a bigger tragedy.
    On bord of the United Airlines flight 93 were 45 persons.


    9. Folie
    At 10.05 a.m. the south tower of the WTC fell.
    23 minutes later, at 10.28 a.m. the north tower fell as well.


    10. Folie
    The people near the WTC ran for their lives.


    11. Folie
    4 underground stations and 23 buildings around the WTC collapsed too.
    These pictures speaks for themselves.


    12. Folie
    The whole area was full of dust.


    13. Folie
    Many helpers searched for survivors.
    The search was very dangerous and difficult.
    To this day hundreds of people are still missing.



    14. Folie
    In this terrorist attack about 3000 people died altogether.
    2600 people died in the WTC, from these 30 Germans and 35 firemen.
    266 died in the hijacked planes.
    125 persons died in the Pentagon.



    15. Folie
    Osama Bin Laden and his group AL-Qaida were responsible for these attacks.
    The attacks were very well organized.
    The search for Osama bin Laden ist still going on.



    16. Folie
    We will never forget these terrible attacks.
    Comment
    Könnt ihr bitte das anschauen und schreiben ob da was falsch ist von der Grammatik oder so?
    AuthorLola1992 (672513) 02 Mar 10, 18:31
    Comment
    1. Folie
    11th of September 2001– The worst day in the USA (etwas reißerisch, aber gut ... klingt auch etwas unvollständig "the worst day" of what? The 20th century? In the history of the USA?)



    2. Folie
    On the morning 11th September 2001, the the worst terrrorist attack of our time took place.
    Many people from all over the world sat down stunned in front of their TVs (Mehrzahl, nicht Genitiv!).
    Four planes were hijacked (shortly?) after [unnötig: their] take off and within one and a half hours, they targeted [hier falsch:on] important American buildings.



    3. Folie
    The first plane, American Airlines flight number 11, which originally was to fly from Bosten to Los Angeles, flew into the North Tower of the World Trade Center in New York[löschen:.] at 8.45 a.m.
    On board the Boeing 767, there were 92 people.



    4. Folie
    18 minutes later, at 9.03 a.m., the second plane crashed into the South Tower of the World Trade Center.
    There were 65 persons on board United Airlines flight number 175 .



    5. Folie
    When the second plane hit the tower, everyone realized that it was a terrorist attack.
    The planes were fully loaded with fuel and so they were like big fire bombs Sagt man das wirklich so?.
    The towers were immediately on fire.



    6. Folie
    Desperate and helpless people on the top floors jumped down out of the windows.



    7. Folie
    Exactly at 9.45 a.m., the third plane crashed into the Pentagon in Washington D.C. .
    The Boeing 757 was like a big fire bomb, too.
    This plane had been scheduled to go to San Fransisco.
    On board the American Airlines flight number 77 were 64 people.
    This was still not the end of the attacks.






    8. Folie
    At 10.10 a.m. the fourth hijacked plane crashed near Pittsburgh in Pensylvania and came down in a woodland area.
    Everybody thought that this plane had been targeted at either the White House or Camp David.
    Passengers[löschen:,] who had heard of the other attacks by mobile phone joined forces and to overpowered the hijackers. (Wenn Du planned schreibst, ist nicht sicher, ob sie es auch in die Tat umgesetzt haben)
    Perhaps these passengers prevented a bigger tragedy.
    On bord of the United Airlines flight 93, there were 45 persons.


    9. Folie
    At 10.05 a.m. the South Tower of the WTC collapsed.
    23 minutes later, at 10.28 a.m. the North Tower collapsed as well.


    10. Folie
    Pedestrians near the WTC ran for their lives.


    11. Folie
    4 underground stations and 23 buildings around the WTC collapsed too.
    These pictures speaks s löschen for themselves.


    12. Folie
    The whole area was clouded in dust.


    13. Folie
    Many helpers searched for survivors.
    The search was very dangerous and difficult.
    To this day, hundreds of people are missing (oder: have never been found).



    14. Folie
    In this terrorist attack, about 3000 people died [löschen: altogether].
    2600 people died in the WTC, amongst them were 30 Germans and 35 firemen.
    266 died in the hijacked planes.
    125 people died in the Pentagon.



    15. Folie
    It is thought that Osama Bin Laden and his group: klingt etwas schwachAL-Qaida were responsible for these attacks. (Wissen wir das?)
    The attacks were very well organized.
    The search for Osama bin Laden ist still going on.



    16. Folie
    We will never forget these terrible attacks.
    #1AuthorLady Grey (235863) 02 Mar 10, 18:52
    Comment
    ohne Anspruch auf Vollstaendigkeit:

    1. Folie
    11th of September 2001– The worst day in the USA

    2. Folie
    On the morning of 11, 2001 the worst terrrorist attack of our time happened/occured.
    Many people from all over the world sat stunned in front of their TV’s.
    Four planes hijacked after their take-off targeted important American buildings within one and a half hour.

    3. Folie
    The first plane, a Boeing 767 with 92 on board, American Airlines flight number 11, originally on its way from Bosten to Los Angeles, crashed into the North Tower of the World Trade Center in New York City at 8.45 a.m.

    4. Folie
    18 minutes later, at 9.03 a.m. the second plane crashed into the South Tower of the WTC. 65 passengers were on board of United Airlines flight number 175.

    5. Folie
    When the second plane hit the tower, everyone realized that it was a terrorist attack.
    The planes were fully loaded with fuel and so they were like big fire bombs.
    The towers caught fire immediately.

    6. Folie
    Desperate and helpless people in the top floors jumped out of the windows.

    7. Folie
    Exactly at 9.45 a.m. the third plane crashed into the Pentagon in Washington D.C.
    The planned destination of this plane was San Fransisco.
    On board the American Airlines flight number 77 were 64 people.
    With this the attacks had not yet ended.

    8. Folie
    At 10.10 a.m. the fourth hijacked plane crashed near Pittsburgh, Pensylvania into a wooded area.
    Everybody thought that this plane had either the White House or Camp David, as a target.
    Passengers, who had heard of the other attacks by mobile phone planned to overpower the hijackers.
    Perhaps the passengers prevented a bigger tragedy.
    On bord of the United Airlines flight 93 were 45 persons.

    9. Folie
    At 10.05 a.m. the South Tower of the WTC fell.
    23 minutes later, at 10.28 a.m. the North Tower fell as well.

    10. Folie
    People in the vicinity of the WTC had to run for their lives.


    11. Folie
    Four underground stations and 23 buildings around the WTC collapsed, too.
    These pictures speak for themselves.

    12. Folie
    The whole area was full of dust.


    13. Folie
    Many helpers searched for survivors.
    The search was very dangerous and difficult.
    To this day hundreds of people are still missing.

    14. Folie
    In this terrorist attack about 3000 people died altogether.
    2600 people died in the WTC, from these 30 Germans and 35 firemen.
    266 died in the hijacked planes.
    125 persons died in the Pentagon.



    15. Folie
    Osama Bin Laden and his group AL-Qaida were responsible for these attacks.
    The attacks were very well organized.
    The search for Osama bin Laden ist still going on.



    16. Folie
    We will never forget these terrible attacks.
    #2AuthorRex (236185) 02 Mar 10, 19:04
    Comment
    Ach ja, und es heißt natürlich Boston!
    #3AuthorLady Grey (235863) 02 Mar 10, 19:26
     
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