Sources | They met first in the bath. This is the feeling, the smell, the sound, of their bodies colliding in the bathwater. The water is ten degrees over blood temperature. Mysterious, flattering light falls from above. Their heads swim in alkaline gurgle and babble. Then her yelp and his spluttering apology echo off the pillars and ceiling while billowing bodies titter and flirt around them. Experience it again, this portentous warm accident. His innocent blind lunge, only half-swimming stroke, half-stretch, but too vigorous and vulgar for these languid, ghostly wits.
Plat!, he strikes female flesh, soft yet resilient, jumps up too fast, hair streaming in his eyes, and overbalances against her, the second, inexcusable, slithery bump causing her indignant gasp. |
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Comment | wenn das der Kontext (man darf auch mehr als einen Satz angeben, damits klarer wird um was es geht) ist, scheint mir weniger das Wasser als die Frau betatscht wird.
Patsch! wär mein Vorschlag passt fürs Antatschen der Frau und des Wassers. (das Platsch übernimmt vielleicht die Frau mit ner Ohrfeige..) |
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